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P-S Wallpaper by jumomo P-S Wallpaper by jumomo
Im not really happy with the accessoirs the text and the tv stripes so if you have any idea for improving tell me.
Comments and cretique is here even more welcome than usuall.

The fullview contains more detail as usuall ;)
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:icongrecoart:
grecoart Oct 30, 2006   Photographer
good work
if you want visit my gallery and my personal website [link]
thank you
you are welcome
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:iconblue-letter:
i think it looks cool
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:iconopticaliber:
If I were editing this...I would add some depth! Use perspective (prob 1 point). Throw a vanishing point in there and have the text conform to this as if they were walls of a cavern. I'de put the vanishing point wherever you want attention drawn, as the eye will naturally gravitate towards this point. I would also throw the text behind the blue-ish figure.

Sorry if this has already been suggested, as I didn't read all the posts...
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:iconjumomo:
Sorry I didn not understand most of what you said o.o
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:iconopticaliber:
:) Sorry, Let me try to rephrase.
What I was trying to say is: make it look more three dimensional.

For instance, have the lower text even taller on the lefthand side. Have the right hand side of the same text box even shorter. Then adjust the overall horizontal size to much smaller. You already do this, I'm just saying make it more dramatic.

Check out this photo:
[link]
Imagine your text is written on the buildings walls.
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:iconjumomo:
Im not sure if it was intentioned to make it look like the text adds to the perspective.
I dont think it would be looking better. Plus even If I wanted to follow your instructions I dont have access to the .ufo editable files now. My bad ^^
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:iconopticaliber:
Don't get me wrong, it looks great the way it is. I didn't mean to come off rude, but you did ask for critique.
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:iconjumomo:
Dont worry ... I dont take it bad. I just didnt understand your advice well enough.
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:iconbleebt:
very cool. thanks for visiting my page too :)
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