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P-S Wallpaper by jumomo P-S Wallpaper by jumomo
Im not really happy with the accessoirs the text and the tv stripes so if you have any idea for improving tell me.
Comments and cretique is here even more welcome than usuall.

The fullview contains more detail as usuall ;)
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:icongrecoart:
grecoart Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2006   Photographer
good work
if you want visit my gallery and my personal website [link]
thank you
you are welcome
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2006
No thanks
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:iconblue-letter:
blue-letter Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2006
i think it looks cool
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:iconopticaliber:
Opticaliber Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2006
If I were editing this...I would add some depth! Use perspective (prob 1 point). Throw a vanishing point in there and have the text conform to this as if they were walls of a cavern. I'de put the vanishing point wherever you want attention drawn, as the eye will naturally gravitate towards this point. I would also throw the text behind the blue-ish figure.

Sorry if this has already been suggested, as I didn't read all the posts...
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2006
Sorry I didn not understand most of what you said o.o
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:iconopticaliber:
Opticaliber Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2006
:) Sorry, Let me try to rephrase.
What I was trying to say is: make it look more three dimensional.

For instance, have the lower text even taller on the lefthand side. Have the right hand side of the same text box even shorter. Then adjust the overall horizontal size to much smaller. You already do this, I'm just saying make it more dramatic.

Check out this photo:
[link]
Imagine your text is written on the buildings walls.
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2006
Im not sure if it was intentioned to make it look like the text adds to the perspective.
I dont think it would be looking better. Plus even If I wanted to follow your instructions I dont have access to the .ufo editable files now. My bad ^^
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:iconopticaliber:
Opticaliber Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2006
Don't get me wrong, it looks great the way it is. I didn't mean to come off rude, but you did ask for critique.
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2006
Dont worry ... I dont take it bad. I just didnt understand your advice well enough.
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:iconbleebt:
bleebt Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2006
very cool. thanks for visiting my page too :)
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:iconsiathlinux:
SiathLinux Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
To the question of getting rid of 'tv lines' Extremely High resolution render - scale down to 'normal' size (for example render in 4000x3000 and then resize the rendered image to 1600x1200 or 1024x768)... the resize will 'smooth' a lot of issues when scaling down.

I really like the overall 'look and feel of this one.
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2006
Tv lines has been aded in postwork by intention.
Good you like it ;)
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:iconsiathlinux:
SiathLinux Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
agh ok...

Your Welcome.
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2006
I didnt even knew they come by accident ... never experienced it .. but i usually dont render at small resolutions ... so perhaps thats why.
Does it look bad like this?
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:iconsiathlinux:
SiathLinux Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NO, it looks great, I thought your comment was that you couldn't work out how to get them to go away.... It's an excellent image.
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2006
I see thank you then ^^
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:iconsiathlinux:
SiathLinux Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your Welcome.
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:icondarrendiewo:
darrendiewo Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2006
I'm quite fond of the texture. =)
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2006
Thanks a lot :)
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:iconrammstein-freak:
rammstein-freak Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2006
I like it!!!! Purple is my fav color and it caught my eye!!
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006
If you see this purple I would recommend checking the color temperature of your monitor.
It is rather a nice blue.
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:iconrammstein-freak:
rammstein-freak Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006
Ooops sorry about that...I have been real sick with a 104 temp....:sick: and just recooperating from almost pnemonia anyway, I also like the color blue!
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006
How much is 104 in celsius?
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:iconrammstein-freak:
rammstein-freak Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2006
40 celsius....I think
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2006
Ah ok
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:iconrandom4now:
Random4Now Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2006
Wow! That's cool! :D
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:iconshockspark1985:
shockspark1985 Featured By Owner May 22, 2005
i really like this. love the sharded textures, beautiful use of the color purple, good stuff. i'd use it. :)
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner May 23, 2005
Glad you like ;)
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:iconr3d-6ar0n:
r3d-6ar0n Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2005
Oi! Replace the text with code, C, pert, whatever O.o
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2005
Why?
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:iconskinty:
Skinty Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
Hey, thats really cool. The render is very good, but im not too crazy about the 2d, maybe take the text away and add a few shapes or whatnot. But otherwise goodjob man.
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
What do you mean with shapes?
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:iconskinty:
Skinty Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
For example - [link] :)
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
I dont get it o_O
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:iconskinty:
Skinty Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
Ok, hehe... its 5:50am here atm, so maybe thats why im not making any sense :P

Log onto MSN :)
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
So we are bot at gtm +1 ? ^^
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:iconskinty:
Skinty Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
Like... circles, grids, stars, anything really.. just to give it an extra effect
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
Thats not so easy :P I wanted to do but i couldnt think of some nice things ...
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:iconskinty:
Skinty Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
Heh, just like random 2d shapes
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
How to do?
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:iconisis-amataeru:
isis-amataeru Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
:wow: that's so awesome... yay finally new wallpapers~! :heart:
I really love the perspective of the projectile object, and all the radical designs that increase its dimensional surface. The text is really appealing and gives you a feeling like you are in a computer...which is really awesome! XD I like the shading and the colors fading to white towards the top than the bottom of the surface. Adds to texture and depth in appearance.
A dazzling piece like always! :heart: Great job!
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
Im very glad you like it :)
You really always give so good cretique :glomp:
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:iconisis-amataeru:
isis-amataeru Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2005
No problem! XD :glomp:
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:iconr3d-6ar0n:
r3d-6ar0n Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
this is my wallpaper now!
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
Thanks for using ;)
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:iconogproductions:
OGProductions Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
Well, for one, that.... thing... it's COOL whatever it is... ^^;, that's fine. I say leave it. But, yes, I would do away with the words. Then, i think it'll look good. :D
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
So you say text removal?
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:iconogproductions:
OGProductions Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2005
Yes.
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:icontinnu:
Tinnu Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
finds cool, sieht sehr spacig aus, wie'n raumschiff...kann aber den text net so lesen, was stehtn da :D? hab bock auf heidelbeer-kuchen *_* ... tooo~ll ~^.^~
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:iconjumomo:
jumomo Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2005
He hü? Heidelboris-kuchen? Also doch "Armine" :P Rotenburg hatte seinen Einfluss XD
Eh spacig ? Ich denke mal ... das hört sich mehr positiv an als negativ ^^ Also danke :giggle:
Der Text ist eigentlich nur eine definition von phasenverschiebung ... soll ich dir link geben ? muahahaha XD
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