If I were editing this...I would add some depth! Use perspective (prob 1 point). Throw a vanishing point in there and have the text conform to this as if they were walls of a cavern. I'de put the vanishing point wherever you want attention drawn, as the eye will naturally gravitate towards this point. I would also throw the text behind the blue-ish figure.
Sorry if this has already been suggested, as I didn't read all the posts...
Sorry, Let me try to rephrase.
What I was trying to say is: make it look more three dimensional.
For instance, have the lower text even taller on the lefthand side. Have the right hand side of the same text box even shorter. Then adjust the overall horizontal size to much smaller. You already do this, I'm just saying make it more dramatic.
Check out this photo: [link]
Imagine your text is written on the buildings walls.
Im not sure if it was intentioned to make it look like the text adds to the perspective.
I dont think it would be looking better. Plus even If I wanted to follow your instructions I dont have access to the .ufo editable files now. My bad ^^
To the question of getting rid of 'tv lines' Extremely High resolution render - scale down to 'normal' size (for example render in 4000x3000 and then resize the rendered image to 1600x1200 or 1024x768)... the resize will 'smooth' a lot of issues when scaling down.
I really like the overall 'look and feel of this one.
that's so awesome... yay finally new wallpapers~!
I really love the perspective of the projectile object, and all the radical designs that increase its dimensional surface. The text is really appealing and gives you a feeling like you are in a computer...which is really awesome! XD I like the shading and the colors fading to white towards the top than the bottom of the surface. Adds to texture and depth in appearance.
A dazzling piece like always! Great job!
He hü? Heidelboris-kuchen? Also doch "Armine" Rotenburg hatte seinen Einfluss XD
Eh spacig ? Ich denke mal ... das hört sich mehr positiv an als negativ ^^ Also danke
Der Text ist eigentlich nur eine definition von phasenverschiebung ... soll ich dir link geben ? muahahaha XD